wrttn from a nice perspective.well described. u hv mentioned so many aspects n moments of her life which were as powerful as the agony in the last stanza-like her 'waiting',her' care'her 'helplessness'etc bt chose to end with the aim to raise against male-chauvinism. ur flow was bit delicate n more on all the loving relations so i did nt think this wud end on sch issue.But I LIKED IT VERY MUCH.
wrttn from a nice perspective.well described. u hv mentioned so many aspects n moments of her life which were as powerful as the agony in the last stanza-like her 'waiting',her' care'her 'helplessness'etc bt chose to end with the aim to raise against male-chauvinism.
ReplyDeleteur flow was bit delicate n more on all the loving relations so i did nt think this wud end on sch issue.But I LIKED IT VERY MUCH.