yeah,rashmi,sensible topic.just mk it bit delicate as per the feeling.there r few sentences which r very flat in xpression,just turn thoz into bit dramatic.u can know thoz lines when will read forgetting tht u hv wrttn the story.mainly in the 2nd section.it will b a very nice story.
Actually this is a story which was written near about 10 years before. Today I got a mail from Fakir. He told how to post oriya scripts online. And I was just testing it.
i am nt getting the text of this story.why?
ReplyDeletebecause i ve not posted it. ha ha ha
ReplyDeleteyeah,rashmi,sensible topic.just mk it bit delicate as per the feeling.there r few sentences which r very flat in xpression,just turn thoz into bit dramatic.u can know thoz lines when will read forgetting tht u hv wrttn the story.mainly in the 2nd section.it will b a very nice story.
ReplyDeleteActually this is a story which was written near about 10 years before. Today I got a mail from Fakir. He told how to post oriya scripts online. And I was just testing it.
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